Thursday, September 29, 2005

it's not ok to eat fish

if wishes were fishes,
i'd be the stream -
wishes within me,
shimmering

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

The lovely poem is eclipsed by the trite title, er tritle. Trifle. Truffle?

4:02 PM, April 25, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

if titles were turtles,
i'd be the pond -
titles all up in me,
mon

4:04 PM, April 25, 2006  

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