Friday, June 03, 2005

A leaf on the stream - 6/3/2005

I'm just a leaf
on the stream
of consciousness
and being
I'm flowing along
the waking dream
I'm dancing to
the currents unseen

O harmony
is a blissful thing
O harmony
my life is a stream

and the water
is clean
and deep
as could be
and I'm drifting
to the soundless sea
and I'm singing a song
of boundless glee
and the mermaids
are singing

are they singing for me?


Anonymous Anonymous said...


I especially like the changes to the first stanza. You know... it was great in the original form, too!

BTW, I'm also constantly changing poems I've already written. Some have 5 or 6 versions!

5:31 AM, June 05, 2005  

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